In the video, the creation of a new technology is shown. This man is basically demonstrating what he has come up with, the creation of another level of interaction between the virtual and physical world. The humanly written sticky that is passed on to the computer is one great example. This man really is thinking in a way to really create progress, since the program is destined to be a share ware. The new emerging technology such as the sticky notes really created an impact on myself since this means we are getting really close to the big leap in robotics.
The greatest thing about this technology is the things you could actually do with it. The nice thing is the fact to have a computer that you can use practically on anywhere. The greatest complications are the fact that this technology has to first of all be invented, which I guess will take a long time. The also big factor is the privacy sacrifice you will be making by deciding to use this very portable "computer".
An open source software is a almost free software, easy to use, easy to download. The pros are the fact that such a good software is available and that this would be easy to access practically to anyone. The bad fact for the person who made it is the problems with piracy. The thing is as innovating as this sofware is, there are going to be many problems with the making of it, but, there is definitely no doubt that this software is going to revolutionize the way we live.
This video description is very well written. I think that you could fix some grammatical errors in this essay. Also you did not answer some of the questions correctly. You should re-read what you write so that you can see your mistakes. I agree that this new device is going to change how the world communicates. Although, I think this device will be expensive.
ResponderEliminarYES! YES! I agree 100% that the problem is it has to be invented from scratch. I mean, If some one just came up to me and sold me this then I would buy it. Make it yourself? It's not that I'm lazy, but I don't think so. The point of technology is to simplyfy your life. I'm so busy, I could never finish making my own. I need this to be commercialized because it is such a great idea I KNOW everyone would buy it. Any whay I like this paragraph, it is good!
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ResponderEliminarYou did an awesome job. I really like how you express your ideas. I agree with Thomas that this device will be expensive. I think too that it will change the world.
Jorge, I really enjoyed reading your paragraphs!! Your descriptions and ideas are just really right. Open source can really cause some piracy. but you take your own risks by posting whatever you want in the internet! You mentioned that you need to take care of the privacy we would do while we used a transportable computer, but I don't think people would really be interested in what are do. You should also try using the instant spelling corrections this technology makes for us because you have some finger mistakes. Everybody does that so don't really worry. :D
ResponderEliminarI was amazed of how this man have created this new technology. I couldn't imagine how much time of thinking and preparing all of this. How many times he tried it and just don't get it. I was impress on this new technology. I agree with you, this would revolutionize our life in a future. I like your paragraph.
ResponderEliminarI totally agree with you, this new technology will change everything we know. I think this computer will make life much easier for the people who buy it. Everyone will love this new computer but only a few people will buy it.
ResponderEliminarJorge, i enjoy readying about what you have to say. You have a lot of things on your mind when you see somthing like these things and reading stuff from you is ever interesting. You have very good points about a lot of things. Even thought somtimes i dont know what your talking about because you use such big words and stuff. But very good job.
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