jueves, 21 de enero de 2010
Social Networking -- Keeping in Touch
Yesterday, we almost finished watching this film about the internet evolving influence on the people, it was cool. So, there was a very interesting subject with regards the "online conflicts" with other people. I really think this conflict is in fact bad, why?, you are insulting someone that most probably you would not insult in person. What this "tactic" does is only make up an image of the aggressor being such a "bully", well, he really is just a coward with some spare time. I would have to say, online "junk talk" only does harm to the people, to be honest, I would not mind, but, there are many people who do get offended. I haven't done this, since I really do not use the internet to really "communicate" a lot, and I am planning to not do this either. To conclude, this internet conlfict thing really hast to stop for the good of the internet community.
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I think that the first sentence could be split into two parts, putting more details into the IT WAS COOL part. Also with the third sentence, the fist part could end with WHY? and start the new sentence with the answer to the question. Actually, you have plenty of run-on sentences :S
ResponderEliminarYou should re-read your work and see if it really makes sense and if you could start a new sentence with the long ones you have. Other than that, I mostly agree with you. There are plenty of weird people who just use the internet to stalk people.